Tuesday, April 22, 2008

Theme Week Thirteen


At the far edge of the blueberry field sat a large yellow house. The house was built just last year and is quite the beautiful site to see. It gives an onlooker driving by the breath taking views everyone wishes they had in a home. It starts at the bottom with a day light basement and right above is a porch that wraps around the entire main floor. Which is where people are seen enjoying the day on the large patio. From the back side of the deck I see windows going up the entire house, allowing all the morning sun to shine in and give the good morning mood. On the second level is a balcony coming out the center of the second floor. It contains enormous flower boxes with ivy and some sort of drooping pink and blue flowers. The flowers are a symbol of how much the owners care about appearances. From a distance the house looks like a modern day castle in yellow. Up close it is a dream house for any family to live in.

2 comments:

johngoldfine said...

Yuo're taking the word 'sketch' too literally--a vignette does more than describe. This is all from the outside, and a vignette is a sharp lightning flash that illuminates quickly. This isn't doing that. Take a look at some of the week 13s from past students and try again.

johngoldfine said...

Wish I could see the original to compare... but, yes, ok.